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Dead beat-Script/Story Board Part 1

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Dead Beat (script/story board) Part 1
+Ideas: Web Comic. Book. Flash Comic.

·        17 year old boy (Miles)
·        Tall, lankyish, Shortish hair, blond, shy, possessive, nerdy, handsome, kind, defensive, wears glasses.
·        Gets good grades, games all the time, doesn’t go out much, often walks his dogs alone.
·        Blue/green eyes, kind smile, sometimes serious. Usually goofing off.
·        Serious about school. Doesn’t try, but excels anyway.
·        Lives with his parents and his little brother.
·        Usually hangs around in his room. Strong, very book smart. Uses a baseball bat.
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·        16 year old girl (Audrey)
·        Short, thin, hip length hair, white hair, speaks her mind, loud, sings often, boyish, stands up for everyone (but herself), hangs out with guys most of the time, plays guitar, loves reciting poetry, always draws, is in a band.
·         Doesn’t really care about school, half asses everything.
·        Lives with her mom n dad. Runs away from home often. Smokes, and sneaks out.
·        Basically hates her house.
·        Switches between boyfriends, and doesn’t like any of em.
·        Super lonely. Uses an ax, adapts fast, generally puts herself first, always listens to music, uses the music to kill.
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·. 17 years old (Theia)
· hair length down to butt
·badass, possessive, hazel eyes, tall, thin, beautiful, wavy hair, dirty blonde, flirty, shy, likes reading, not nerdy, loves volleyball, plays piano, melee, very graceful,  has a katana, ballet dancer, fast learner, cares for pack, flexible, can be very deadly, Aud’s best friend, and a romantic.
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Start


(Look at alarm clock)  *Alarm clock rings* (Side view) *Waking up, (Front View) sits up, stretches, gets up, turns off the alarm*
*Sleepily ruffles hair* Puts on glasses (View from back) *Walks towards the bathroom**Opens door, walks in, closes it* -Next panel- *looking at his face, as he looks up at himself* (view from side)  Splashes water in face, and just hunches over the sink for a while, before turning on the shower. Room gets steamy, (view of ankles) Steps into the shower. Cuts to him eating breakfast. Picks up remote control on the table and flicks on the tv. The news channel appears talking about murders n stuff, Miles clenches teeth and turns off the TV. Cuts to him getting changed for school, grabs homework and cuts to him outside his house. He looks to the side to find Theia waiting for him. Theia is leaning up against the wall just like she has every day. She leans forward and looks to the side, to see Miles approaching. She smiles at him, she is wearing A blue blazer with a red tank top that she paired it with a belt around her waist, which she wears with a pair of blue denim jeans, she reaches inside her brown indie style back pack, and pulls out a lunch box, and hands it to him. Miles takes it and says “morning Theia, you know you don’t have to make my lunch everyday..”

She laughs and replies with “Don’t be an idiot Miles, you wouldn’t survive without my food”

He grins and says “Haha, I can’t argue with you on that one”

The two laugh and start off for school. The two go on walking and laughing, until they arrive at the school. They cut to a scene of them infront of the school board, checking if they’re in the same class or not. “Aww dang it! I really hoped that we’d be in the same class this year…”
“Dang… You still gonna walk with me every day?”

“Yeah” Theia smiles. “Well, I should get going to homeroom then, cya Miles”

Cuts to Miles walking upstairs, (back view) He is a little bit hunched over in thought, and when he looks up, there is a girl up the stairs, leaning against the wall, holding a notebook and writing in it. The first thing Miles notices is how she’s dressed. It cuts to a panel of her head (side view), her hair is long and oddly white, her lips are slightly pursed in concentration, (next panel) Her shirt a crop top that has three tears in it by her abdomen, and she wears a leather jacket with small spikes on the shoulders and large safety pins at the bottom by the zipper. (Next Panel) Her pants are Black and white striped jeans with holes on the knees. (next Panel) Her black boots are scuffed and worn. (View of Miles’s back) He slowly approaches, when he smells smoke, he looks up to see her now smoking.

“You know smoking is bad for you” He grumbles

“Haha it’s not smoking that’s bad for you, its lung cancer that’s bad for you”

Miles looks at her, studying her expressionless face.

Audrey then looks up from her notebook at Miles.

(View side profile of Aud’s face)

“What. Is there something you want?”

(View side profile of Mil’s face)

“What? No, I was just on my way to class, do you go to this school?”

(View side profile of Aud’s face)

“Yeah, why? Didn’t your mom tell you not to talk to strangers?”

(Front view of Mil)

“She did, but you’re just a student, you also a senior here?”

(Aud removes the cig from her mouth and pushes up from the wall to face Mil in this pose: o-<-< notebook in one hand and cig in the other)

Aud laughs, “Hahaha no way man, I’m only in eleventh grade”

(Audrey turns and walks away)

“Wait!” Mil calls out.

(Audrey turns back around, cig in mouth)

“Let me walk you to class”

“Hahaha sure” (Mil jogs to catch up with her)
So this is the script/story board for the story I am currently writing. It may be a bit confusing, which I apologize for, but please leave some feed back on these, because I honestly have a lot of things that I could improve!
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